This poem is unfinsished I am going to do some major work on it to get it to flow better. I started working on it @ 1:00am last night. It sort of was inspired by The Notebook, Little Mermaid, a girl at work and my imagination.
Let me know what you think, i'll try and make more sense of it....and I'll try and get it fininshed when I have the time.
Sitting afloat of the endless river
Eccentricly gorging each others sight
Yearning 2 fill the void, we quiver
Together, we'll conquer the fear tonight
While lips exchange, we kill their whispers!
Eternal Love is born under the moon
The sorrow we once felt is now beloved
Perennial Love made the doves fly soon
For God witnessed beauty, he hugged it
Gods prayer killed despair 2 guide us anew!
All doubts and negativity become erased
Under the stars we see afar, admist the sprinkle
The tenderness the water flow below brings us grace
Soaring feathers shimmer the night through your eyes twinkle
Springing this autumn night upright, we turn the page
Walking on land, we bury our feet in sand
Making our solemn promise through a kiss
We glow through this ascending dream, feeling our hearts beat in hand
We ensue fate and penetrate, realizing what we missed
Never aging in this timeless feeling, fools believe is bland
Let me know what you think, i'll try and make more sense of it....and I'll try and get it fininshed when I have the time.
Sitting afloat of the endless river
Eccentricly gorging each others sight
Yearning 2 fill the void, we quiver
Together, we'll conquer the fear tonight
While lips exchange, we kill their whispers!
Eternal Love is born under the moon
The sorrow we once felt is now beloved
Perennial Love made the doves fly soon
For God witnessed beauty, he hugged it
Gods prayer killed despair 2 guide us anew!
All doubts and negativity become erased
Under the stars we see afar, admist the sprinkle
The tenderness the water flow below brings us grace
Soaring feathers shimmer the night through your eyes twinkle
Springing this autumn night upright, we turn the page
Walking on land, we bury our feet in sand
Making our solemn promise through a kiss
We glow through this ascending dream, feeling our hearts beat in hand
We ensue fate and penetrate, realizing what we missed
Never aging in this timeless feeling, fools believe is bland
