mostly dude just doesnt know where to put periods or commas...
Mostly, dude doesn't know the difference between the possessive and the plural. It's not "Hollywoods hottest clubs", it's Hollywood's hottest clubs. It's not fans treasure chest, it's fan's treasure chest. It's not privledges, it's privileges. It's not ths, it's this. It's up close, not upclose. It's reflect, not relfect. "Enter to win DreamPac prizes, a be famous". I'm pretty sure it should say "and be famous". It's not "enter on of many", it's "enter one of many". It's not thier, it's their.
So, yeah. It is shameful.