Ghettostar aka G~mile: Jealousy

[GhettoStar]

given that they will be a cat. for the top mc on the board shit I figured I throw my hat in the ring....been a mintue since I posted some shit since havent been getting alot of feedback or shit I could make use with but here it is off my 9th cd I've been slinging round these parts


http://www.soundclick.com/dainfamousgreenemile

http://s12.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3GYMNNBOAL1OY0WS3TOQ2F75W0

http://rapidshare.de/files/7064354/11_Track_11.mp3.html



replyed to Limn and Mark Deez

 

[GhettoStar]

bump

 

[The.Menace]

hehehe I like this a lot..... I just feel like that your voice isn't loud enough - the melody is good but a lil too dominant in my view, I just like it if the voice plays the main role in a song. But anyway, this is creative, I like it.

 

[GhettoStar]

hehehe I like this a lot..... I just feel like that your voice isn't loud enough - the melody is good but a lil too dominant in my view, I just like it if the voice plays the main role in a song. But anyway, this is creative, I like it.

the whole songs concept is just to diss people who just rely on punchlines, basically its just to show that it isnt that hard to make "snaps" on record....at least try to be creative.thanx

 

[JarG]

vocal lil to low and its ok track

 

[GhettoStar]

thanx playa

 

[crittaz]

nice to see u back making some music man. Beat is interesting definitely different. Your flow has gotten better, smoother. Vocals sound like they are at the right level to me. good stuff. keep droppin.

 

[GhettoStar]

nice to see u back making some music man. Beat is interesting definitely different. Your flow has gotten better, smoother. Vocals sound like they are at the right level to me. good stuff. keep droppin.

nice to fianlly see you back on the board'....and thanx but I'm always making music just havent been posting it on here cause you dont get too much feed you dig? Just finished my 9th cd and have sold 38 copies of it just by walking up to people saying buy my shit basically

 

[BurnsLuciano]

i like the sound quality but im not feeling the track not my type of hip hop but keep up the good work

 

[Shot 21]

Nice intro. Dont like the beat but you ride it well. Nice flow. Lol some funny shit you spittin here. Makin me laugh. Catchy chorus. What the fuck is that beat doing at the 3rd verse!!! Sicc lyrics.

Overall a great track. I hate that beat but you go on it perfect. Nice one.

 

[Shot 21]

nice to fianlly see you back on the board'....and thanx but I'm always making music just havent been posting it on here cause you dont get too much feed you dig? Just finished my 9th cd and have sold 38 copies of it just by walking up to people saying buy my shit basically

Lol that works? Ima try it!

 

[Advocate]

your flow is tight man. i agree with what people are saying about beat being different, but i think your rocking it. having a little trouble hearing you. your lyrics are hot, a lot better than your average track. chorus sounds nice too haha i really cant say anything bad about this man, im trying to give some constructive criticism but i cant say shit.

i hope you keep posting

a

 

[Hymnz]

im loving the concept of the song and the beat. good work!

 

[GhettoStar]

i like the sound quality but im not feeling the track not my type of hip hop but keep up the good work

will do respect on that'

 

[GhettoStar]

im loving the concept of the song and the beat. good work!

like I said its all bout showing that doing a song full of punch lines isnt special unless you put some thought into it(unlike alot of people who just settle for using this formula)...which I think I did thanks again

 

[GhettoStar]

your flow is tight man. i agree with what people are saying about beat being different, but i think your rocking it. having a little trouble hearing you. your lyrics are hot, a lot better than your average track. chorus sounds nice too haha i really cant say anything bad about this man, im trying to give some constructive criticism but i cant say shit.

i hope you keep posting

a

thanks will do I got a funny ass track that might just sepreate me from the rest....I might post that soon thanks for the feed'

 

[GhettoStar]

Nice intro. Dont like the beat but you ride it well. Nice flow. Lol some funny shit you spittin here. Makin me laugh. Catchy chorus. What the fuck is that beat doing at the 3rd verse!!! Sicc lyrics.

Overall a great track. I hate that beat but you go on it perfect. Nice one.

fo sho it's all bout orginality which I tired to do with this beat'

 

[GhettoStar]

Lol that works? Ima try it!

its my "legal" hustle' haha

 

[GhettoStar]

bump'

 

[PuffnScruff]

i liked it, you have a good flow. the only thing i didnt like was this one part of the beat that was real annoying. if you turned that one part down a bit it would be more enjoyable to listen to.