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Old 01-20-2007, 01:32 AM
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Drugs

Joyous chemicals we adore
We have enough but crave for more
We enjoy the mood and rejoice
We follow it we listen to its voice
Troubles in our world are not important anymore
For we use joyous chemicals that we adore
We fall down in hysterical laughter
We want this mood forever after
Heavy thinking it most likely causes
Plus a few on and off pauses
Hallucinations we enjoy when we discover
Try to understand my tongue speaking stutter
I'm probably high I'm probably doped
No longer feeling these pains I already coped
I hate it when I'm not but love it when I am
It's probably in my head it's probably a scam
These drugs we use set us free
Sometime to places we don’t want to be
Delaying construction inside my brain
To the point to where I become insane
Empty stares through red empty eyes
For a moment I witnessed my humanities goodbyes
Drugs take advantage of our virgin minds
Instead of achievements it stupidly rewinds
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Re: Drugs

I related to these feelinz and thoughts to pointed out on here. I used to smoked weed with my so-called friends and felt like dat sometimes. So I relate to it and the way u wrote it was dope.

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Re: Drugs

Nice poem, the whole poem is a very different style - that makes it really special. I can relate to the topic as well, "We have enough but crave for more"....yeah, until I pass out.
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I think anyone that has done a drug can relate to this very simplistic poem. Simple yes but it hits home.

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Re: Drugs

I really like this poem, but I would not dare do any drugs back in Saudi...play it safe bro.
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Re: Drugs

Its weird, to me it was like coming from the drugee (lol) and then the next line was as if it was someone who stopped taking drugs and realised what was really goin on.. Atleast thats how I read it so I loved it.. Keep writing
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Re: Drugs

thanx everyone
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Very nice. This pretty much sums up doing drugs lol. Its on point and very nice.

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